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I know that a lot of you out there are either aspiring writers or something around there, so like you I know that when I have the chance, I want to get better at something- improve upon my natural talent if you will. So I am offering all of you the chance to do a critique exchange- you comment on the journal asking for a critique- but only if you are also willing to give out one yourself.

You can do this as much as you are willing to read ans critique what they give you.

If you find one that you want to critique or have something that you want critiqued, you can start here. (on this journal)

In your comment on this journal, you can fill out this form:

Title of Work:
(Link to work)
Type of Literature: (poetry, prose, fan fic, script, short story, etc.)
Number of Critiques requesting: (what you are willing to give back)

If you are interested in critiquing for this person, then leave a comment on theirs saying that you are interested, and that you have this work that you want them to look over for you- and then proceed to link them to it.

We can have this going as long as it interests you!

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Elywen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
Title of Work: Ashes of the Dawn
Type of Literature: Fiction. Vampire Novel. More of the Anne Rice feel. In case there is a fear it is like Twilight.
Number of Critiques requesting: This is up to eleven chapters long I do expect someone to sit down and read the whole thing. Unless you really want to because you like it. Right now I am more concerned with the first two chapters because they are attention grabbers in the publishing world. Thus is you have a multi-chapter story I will read the first two chapters and review them for you. If you don't just link me in a note with the two separate works you want me to look at. I rather it not be fanfiction as I don't want to be stuck reading something I am not a fan of, I can't give you fair input then.
Xyloverflow Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Chapter 4 - Run, Just Run - The Lost and Found
Type of literature: fan fic (romance) :rofl:
Number of Critiques requesting: One or two would probably be a good place to start. I know this is my weakest chapter of the series, I'm not going to lie. I'm hoping to recieve and give constructive criticism to hlep others and myself grow as writers :nod:
RedReception Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Title of Work:
The Charm Maker
Type of Literature: Fantasy with elements of action and horror/chapter story (currently at 9 chapters)
Number of Critiques requesting: 10
TheFS Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There's a critique for you on your first chapter!

If you could look over this submission that would be awesome!
Sharingan-Shinobi Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Title of Work:
Fortuna Academy
Type of Literature: Fantasy/ School-life
Number of Critiques requesting: Just an overall Critique on it. I don't mind having more. I'll gladly give as much critiques back as I get~ Actually, not just as much as I get, if you want a critique, just ask away~
Luna-is-only-so-many Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, I don't really have a piece in mind that I'd like critiquing the most on, so just anything recent. I mostly have poems adn a couple stories.

I'm willing to critique however many I get in return, or just ask really. I'm not sure how in depth I can give the critique, but you have to learn right?
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